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"A Crimson Storm" - Medieval Fiction

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"A Crimson Storm" - Medieval Fiction

Postby  BlotchedyDooDah » Sat Mar 11, 2017 9:58 pm

"A Crimson Storm" - Medieval Fiction / Fantasy Story



A Crimson Storm is a story set on a large island, namely Storm Island, which is split into the North, ruled by the ancient, proud Elkspear family, and the South, ruled by the rich, influential Vostyren family - the two factions are divided by the treacherous Frontier Mountains, and for now they are content to co-exist peacefully, but trouble is brewing in all directions...

The savage, godless Skidejor reside on Skidejord Island to the north, a land of shadows and oppression, and they pose a continual threat in the form of raids, piracy, and maybe even something more sinister...

Some of the most powerful and respected lords on Storm Island have decided that King Godric Elkspear is unfit to rule over them, so they've decided to take matters into their own hands, with the help of some powerful friends...

Storm Island has never been a peaceful place, continually plagued with war and rebellion, yet now more than ever, in the year 497 AS, treachery and intrigue lies around every corner...

[Show] Spoiler: The History Books
Sterling's Conquest (0 AS)
The Kazekoke Invasion (25-28 AS)
The Morning War (82-85 AS)*
The Yallister Rebellion (98-100 AS)
The Lieper Rebellion (178-179 AS)
The Rosesteel War (206-218 AS)*
The Winter War (241-242 AS)*
Hungol Invasion (289 AS)
The Sellsword War (310-318 AS)*
The Westere Rebellion (398-405 AS)
The Bastard's War (444-467 AS)*

*The five wars fought between North and South, the best known conflicts on Storm Island

[Show] Spoiler: Appendix... kinda
() - Age at beginning of story

THE NORTH

Elkspear Family - Monarchy in the North

King Godric Elkspear (22) - King of the North
Queen Harper Elkspear (17) - Queen to King Godric; Cousin to King Melchior Vostyren
- - - Prince Edric Elkspear - (3) - Heir to the North; First-born son to King Godric

Lord Richard Elkspear (23) - Lord of Aumont; Lord Commander of the Elkspear fleet; Cousin to King Godric

Great lords in the North

Lord Charles Dancer (40) - Lord of Wood Point; Watchman of Cape Moss
- - - Madhyva Dancer (37) - Explorer; Brother to Lord Dancer
Lord Archie Hoppson (The Laughing Tiger) (40) - Lord of Climber's Keep
Lord Marwyn Winter (72) - Lord of Flodfort
- - - Sir Meyen Maye (90) - Castellan of Flodfort
Lord Wallyce Boyce (50) - Lord of Højborg
- - - Tristan Fyitt (53) - Master-at-Arms at Højborg
Lord Malcolm Cyrstynne (29) - Lord of Mount Fist
- - - Sir Ethan Finch (20) - Knight
Lord Reynold Gemmell (42) - Lord of Nordfort
Lord Matthew Basilmont (31) - Lord of Queensteel; Warden of the Antler
Lord Harold Griffiths (20) - Lord of Silverwatch
Lord Rowann Braxmont (22) - Lord of Stagmouth; Protector of the Stag River
Lord Atherton Battylmoor (42) - Lord of Tarquin's Beacon
- - - Sir Edric Battylmoor (18) - Knight; Second-son to Lord Atherton

THE SOUTH

Vostyren Family - Undisputed monarchy in the South

King Melchior Vostyren (48) - King of the South
Queen Scarlett Vostyren (40) - Queen to King Melchior
- - - Prince Edmund Vostyren (19) - Prince of Amber Gorge; Heir to the South; First-born son to King Melchior
- - - Prince Jaeger Vostyren - (16) Prince of Eastshield; Second-born son to King Melchior

Lord Henry Vostyren (44) - Lord of Stormguard; Guardian of the South; Brother to King Melchior
- - - Darryn Vostyr (23) - Commander of the Royal Bastards; Bastard son to Lord Henry

Vostyren Generals:
Josyph Bayberry (40) - A Vostyren General

Albright Family - Powerful family on the Coast Road

Lord Casey Albright (37) - Lord of Springmore; Guardian of the East; Brother-in-Law to King Melchior
Lady Claudia Albright (36) - Wife to Lord Casey; Sister to King Melchior

Lord Stanley Albright (31) - Lord of Rosebrook; Brother to Lord Casey
- - - Alfie Albright (15) - Heir to Rosebrook; First-born son to Lord Stanley
- - - Jayla Albright (11) - First-born daughter to Lord Stanley
- - - Edmund Albright (8) - Second-born son to Lord Stanley
Lord Stanley's court
Sir Dwayne Jamont (79) - Knight
Sir Oscar Seacat (36) - Knight
Sir Nyle Coyve (45) - Knight

Other great lords in the South

Lord Martyn Swansong (25) - Lord of Westerfort; Guardian of the West
- - - Vyctor Swansong (24) - Brother to Lord Martyn
Lord Eduard Cinnamon (56) - Lord of Sunrise Harbour and the Chain Islands
Lord Robert Brittand (54) - Lord of Summithall
Lord Jon Deftall (30) - Lord of Tiger Gate
Lord Commander Forrest Myrphy (52) - Lord Commander of the Vostyren Fleet
Lord Syl Derik (46) - Lord of Derbrook

The Tiger Guard

Hector Redblade (30) - Commander of the Tiger Guard; Tiger of the Heart
Benjamin Glendor (25) - Tiger of the North
Wilbur Sharp (27) - Tiger of the East
Maurys Mander (19) - Tiger of the South
Stephyn Hunt (29) - Tiger of the West

The Golden Lances

Rycroft Elmont (32) - Commander of the Golden Lances
Braylen Maimont (60) - Treasurer for the Golden Lances
Vyctor Swansong (24) - Captain for the Golden Lances
Davyd Vijkon (42) - Captain for the Golden Lances

The other Great Legions

Ferguss Oxmor (27) - Commander of Conqueror Blood
Sir Dwain Rormont (39) - Commander of Honour and Glory; Knight
Wolfgang White (32) - Commander of the Crimson Tigers
Darryn Vostyr (23) - Commander of the Royal Bastards; Bastard son to Lord Henry Vostyren
Tarquin Questermont (70) - Commander of the Sons of Tarquin
- - - Horace Berhorn (53) - Head of Recruitment for the Sons of Tarquin
Hamish Hangyr (80) - Commander of The Swords Paramount
Naizen Nomura (56) - Commander of Warriors of the Storms
Axell Rosenborg (26) - Commander of the White Roses
Ralph Fulbright (39) - Commander of Winterborne

Miscellaneous

Borys Daut (20) - Captain of Penelope
Alyx Morttyn (60) - Former Commander of the Golden Lances

OUTSIDE OF STORM ISLAND

Arthur Whitestaff (16) - Who knows?
Alfred Burmose (59) - Criminal from Seifukumi
Darryn Vostyr (23) - Commander of the Royal Bastards; Bastard son to Lord Henry Vostyren
Itsuki (34) - Workmaster in Seifukumi
Lord Friedrich Bertrand (41) - Overlord of The Brothers; Lord of Hafenstadt; Protector of Southbrother

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Chapters (Phase 1)
Arthur I | Richard I | Stanley I | Charles I | Arthur II | Jaeger I | Richard II | Wallyce Boyce

Chapters (Phase 2)
Charles II | Stanley II | Richard III | Arthur III | Jaeger II

Progress:
Chapters - 11 (2 in progress)
Pages - 60 (A4) (4 unpublished)
Words - 25,682

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Re: "A Storm of Crimson" - Medieval Fiction

Postby  pumukel » Sat Mar 11, 2017 11:31 pm

Nice to have you back in writing business. I hope I'll find the time to read and feedback a little. Will you also write a chapter about DraCoNT receiving his prize?
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Re: "A Storm of Crimson" - Medieval Fiction

Postby  BlotchedyDooDah » Sat Mar 11, 2017 11:33 pm

  11 Mar 2017, 22:27 GMT » pumukel wrote:
Nice to have you back in writing business. I hope I'll find the time to read and feedback a little. Will you also write a chapter about DraCoNT receiving his prize money?


The prediction contest was in the hands of Feanor and the prizes were to be provided by CaNaBliS, I don't know what happened, but all the prize money for the top 3 finishers and best recorded game was sent, feel free to ask any of them.
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Re: "A Crimson Storm" - Medieval Fiction

Postby  BlotchedyDooDah » Sun Mar 12, 2017 3:33 pm

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Re: "A Crimson Storm" - Medieval Fiction

Postby  BlotchedyDooDah » Sun Mar 12, 2017 9:49 pm

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Re: "A Storm of Crimson" - Medieval Fiction

Postby  DraXieN » Sun Mar 12, 2017 10:34 pm

  11 Mar 2017, 22:33 GMT » BlotchedyDooDah wrote:
  11 Mar 2017, 22:27 GMT » pumukel wrote:
Nice to have you back in writing business. I hope I'll find the time to read and feedback a little. Will you also write a chapter about DraCoNT receiving his prize money?


The prediction contest was in the hands of Feanor and the prizes were to be provided by CaNaBliS, I don't know what happened, but all the prize money for the top 3 finishers and best recorded game was sent, feel free to ask any of them.


It wasn't prize money, it was a keyboard/mouse for 1st/2nd. I can tell exactly what happened, I msged Blotch like 4 - 5 times during like 2 months after the contest ended. I really needed mouse at that time and was about to buy one myself but was waiting if Blotch/CanabliS will send me the mouse according to their promise. Blotch wasn't responding at all, I msged CanabliS. None of them ever sent me anything, none of them ever responded, none of them ever said sorry. That's just a reminder for you Blotch. The outcome was that I played 2 months more with a very broken mouse and I had to pay 25 eur more for the mouse I wanted, because the discount it has when I was about to buy it run out.
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Re: "A Crimson Storm" - Medieval Fiction

Postby BMAPC187 » Sun Mar 12, 2017 10:42 pm

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perhaps philippe le bon will also contribute a chapter where he mentions what happened to the money he owes to blotch
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